poem, Short stories

Castle

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She lived in a castle, in the old woods.

Every full moon she comes out to her balcony and stares at moon.

Her flying shawl in wind reminded me of waves in the ocean

I think I found my state of serenity!

Curiosity was not letting me sleep,

I walked to the castle in the full moon, just to take a glance.

Oh, what a stunning beauty she was

An old idol wrapped in a cloth?

Disappointedly, I pulled the cloth, to clean my sweat

Suddenly I heard a voice shout, Are you here again to steal my cloth?

Indeed what an enchanting beauty she was, made me dumbstruck!

For What do you see # 35- 22 June 2020

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Published by Namitha Tantri

Hello! I’m Namitha Tantri, a passionate author, self-publisher, and mom of two. For me, writing is not just a creative outlet; it’s a powerful tool for learning and self-discovery. Each word I pen down helps me grow personally, professionally and spiritually.

8 Comments

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:
    June 25, 2020 at 3:18 pm

    Hey this was great. Unexpected ending.
    Thanks for joining in the challenge

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    1. Namitha Tantri's avatar Namitha says:
      June 25, 2020 at 3:34 pm

      Thank you:)

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      1. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:
        June 25, 2020 at 4:17 pm

        You’re welcome 😉

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  2. Aahana Aggarwal's avatar Aahana Aggarwal says:
    June 25, 2020 at 10:03 pm

    Reminded me of rapunzel in her tower! Beautiful piece:) Pls check out mine too
    https://themysticwagon.wordpress.com/2020/06/25/the-beginning-of-the-novel-in-ancient-times/

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    1. Namitha Tantri's avatar Namitha says:
      June 26, 2020 at 10:44 pm

      Thank you 🙂 sure will do 👍

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  3. Aahana Aggarwal's avatar Aahana Aggarwal says:
    June 26, 2020 at 10:45 pm

    I really loved your post about the Indian temple in Belgium. It feels so good to know that Indian culture is not just restrained to India. Comments on that post were disabled but I had to let you know 🙂

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    1. Namitha Tantri's avatar Namitha says:
      June 26, 2020 at 10:49 pm

      Oh thanks for letting me know 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

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