Romantic brassy sky

It was a beautiful windy evening and the perfect brassy sky. I looked at her and smiled. Her curly hair falling on her forehead, her mermaid body killing all the guys in the beach. I found my soulmate. Under the evidence of brassy sky I give my heart to her. She smiled back to me, this is true love. Out of the ten, she chose me, I can brag about my love to all my friends.

Here she comes. I was about to tell her Hello, oops she shut my mouth with hers. I will be back she said, kissing my hand. Meanwhile let me have an ice cream and update my status on Facebook I thought. ‘Oops where is my purse! did she rob me!’ I need to call my friend I panicked, ‘oh man! where is my mobile’, What is the time? ‘Oh god my branded watch!’ . Only the brassy sky was evident for this robbery.



  1. Mabel Kwong says:

    Beautiful short story about deception. Sometimes beauty, or looks, can be deceiving. Appearances are one thing, but what we do, how we behave and the choices we make speak the loudest. Beautiful sunset by the beach. Such a fiery orange sky, and it must have been such a delight to watch 🙂

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    1. namithap says:

      Thank you 🙂 I agree with you..

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  2. “Mermaid body” is such an excellent description! I love this story! 🙂

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    1. namithap says:

      Thank you:)


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